no matter how odd this sounds, you need more jumps.
you have a whole bunch of jumps, but a lot of them are only 5s and switch 5s. although they're steezy if you had some more footy of say, one of our spring park days with some 10s and stuff, i think sponsors would be a little more intrigued. you don't need 192875461324 shots of big spins, but if you show off a couple, it'd definitely help.
also, you show that you're obviously really good on jibs, but you need a greater ratio of rails to boxes (as said above). and maybe a couple more 4s out? i dunno... maybe not, the one(s) you put in  were good, and you don't want a hundred 4s like all the east coasters' promos, but you also don't want to feel the need to put in a couple ones that look hucked.
haha, sorry, i typed a fucking lot, but i hope that helps