Joe Murrell Edit

Take out all the doubles of tricks and put the best one in, only use the last song, take out filler as other said and make a solid 2 min seggy to send in.
 
devun walsh first got sponsored by his editing. it can show your personality and creativity. a sponosred person needs to be more than a dope skier, they need to be marketable
 
ya i know i just want as many ppl to see it therefore as many tips so he can send in the best possible video to the sponsors. sorry if i'm taking up the priceless space at the top of the thread listing.
 
He's got truck drivers down, and dub backies.... but really should focus on rails.... and more different grabs, and switch steeze.

There's some pointers... now send it to companies.
 
Hey man, didn't know my vid was on hear. Well, thanks for the reviews. gona be hitting the rails soon enough in 2 alpes this summer, yeah!
 
sweet edit. I would take out some of the truck driver shots for sure. I would also only leave in one shot of the double back. There was two shots of an identical disaster, so take out the second of those. Also there is the shaky shot of the hip during the day at around 1:39 which I would remove. Other than that it was sick.
 
that was totally uncalled for..... you really didnt need to say that.

the edit was pretty good. jumps are good. rails not so much. and lots of repeated tricks. way to long.

so work on rails and shorten the edit.
 
pretty good joey. a bit of work on your technique wouldnt hurt in my opinion, a few dangly arms and a lot of back seat riding. i think this is largely a result of the poor position of your hands when your riding. trying to hit you with some positive criticism so you can take it to the next level. apart from that, good work mate
 
hahahaa. it hasnt even finished loading yet, but i heard klashnikoff beign mentioned! get some Kano or roll deep on that!!! i just made a spanckercerized video too. you're better than me. i know that without seeing it cos my mate videoed you with the pistol flip. dope. hopefully my rails will be my saving grace!
 
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