Is anyone really good at spanish in here?

if anyone is good at spanish can you chek my short paragraph? its just a rough draft so far and im not verygood at spanish so i need some help. my teacher circled pretty much every other word in my paragraph because they were all mistakes
 
its prety much like ten sentences about my life and what i did in the past. right now were doing preterite so thats why were doing that. ill pm you my paragraph
 
im sick look at all the words i know

uno dos tres quattro cinco

hernandez

martinez

ortiz

ramon

pedro

erinque

dominguez

gomez

sanchez

fernando

jose

reyes

julio

adios

hola

chupacabra
 
why don't you just throw it up on here, i'm decent at spanish...im in spanish 3 so same as you but i have an A in it.
 
I lived in the Dominican Republic for 2 years and I am fluent in spanish. if you still need help, you can forward it onto me and I could read through it for you.
 
Yup.. don't wanna be taking advice from me.. 54 average with spanish2 and somehow (thanks to my partner) got a 78 in spanish3
 
i'm fluent as well, since i also spent a couple years blathering on in the spanish tongue. post your writing up here and let's have at it...and you'll get an A.
 
yo hice mucho actividades durant mi vida

i have done many activities during my life

haha thats all i can think of
 
you're translation is a little off. you used the preterit tense in spanish but your english translation used the present perfect tense. granted, the perfect tenses have an altered usage in spanish, but in this case a native speaker would have used it.
 
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