I need POEM PEOPLE!

KRASHED

KRASHED

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Can anyone write a quick poem (free verse) that includes the words lock, neurology, polt foot, practiced, reengage, spirits, sierra leone, subject, valley, and web?

I've already written one pretty good one but I can't seem to pull together a second one. I won't steal your ideas I just need to see how other people approach this kind of stuff. Thanks and +++Karma in advance to anyone who puts some effort into it.

O ya each on of the words can only be used once, there are 10 words so there should only be ten lines with one word used as the anchor in each.
 
is it supposed to be like a poem for like high school that doesn't have to be proper and can just be like rhyming words or is it supposed to be like proper and for a literature class
 
lock, neurology, polt foot, practiced, reengage, spirits, sierra leone, subject, valley, and web

Spirits of the sierra leone lay in the valley.

The subject of freedom locked out.

No practice of neurology, no browsing the web.

Most suffer, polt foot ridden.

Can we reengage their lives?

IDK

im pretty good at poetry but this was hard, hope that helped
 
fantastic that's just the kind of inspiration I needed, I wanted to work off the idea of Sierra Leones war torn history.

+Karma!

Any other ideas?
 
sorry, i didint even read the thread,i had to take a shit so i didint read and wrote that, my bad man
 
haha no idea what this is

I's a nervous fucking wreck, Googled up some neurology

Did about as much good as a subject major scientology

God put me on my own tonight, gotta get some spirts in me

I'm at the bottom of a valley with snipers on both sides

Practiced in all sects of murder but I don't know this time

Just a fly in a web, the number up's mine

I be a renegade soldier trapped behind enemy lines

Trigger fingers on lock, calibrated fine

Just another worthelss street soul

Journying back up tonight
 


There was an eternal lock on my head

Dr. of Neurology had though me to be dead

Spirits were low but life soon was over

I am now a renegade to show her

The web once trapped fell

No longer in a dark valley of hell

The subject on my mind lightened

The way I practiced my life brightened

Now I find myself in the Sierra leone

by myself dying alone

I just went right through and wrote this in about 5 minutes without any idea what I was going to write so it might not make sense but it might give you an idea. You can turn it in too if you want to half ass things, i don't care. I don't know what poll foot is either so i couldn't put it in

 
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