I am planning to make some shirts

[seine_Dudeheit]

What do you think, about theese? I want to make some tee´s for my little crocheting-brand. So I was first thinking about just winter (nr.1), but came then to the idea, that I could just make different Tee´s for different elements. I chose snow, water, dirt and air, representing different kinds of sports. (then it is more diverse, and more people would wear them)

 

[chimp]

those are some really cool shirts, i would probaly buy one, i dont know if i would buy it black tho some other color possibly blue

 

[Caveman.]

i like your shirts, you need to use other colors than just black and white though, the only one where that scheme realy worked was the first one

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

Jea, I have to try, but I just wanted to hold up the b/w theme. - I dont really like to much different colours. 

 

[Caveman.]

especially the dirt one, that looks like something i would wear mountain biking except that i will not wear a black shirt all day in the sun. maybe try green or brown...

 

[Ghost]

the snow one is sick. I'd definitely rock that

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

thats true ... brown would be nice here

 

[[Adam]]

cool shirts i would were them but ad some color and they would be sick

 

[Alex_thedroog]

that first one is really really cool

 

[pho[tog]rapher]

these are really really dope. pretty simple but each one's graphics suit it's purpose really well. it'd love to see you print some up.

 

[OAK_TREE]

I like the snow one and agree with the other people about changing the colors up.

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

The problem will be, to find someone who will print relatively cheap. And cheap printers will probably not print all over the shoulder and on the back. I might change the design, that it will just be printed in the center of the chest. But the question is, if it still works then. 

 

[word-sauce]

dope shirts id definetly rock the very first one that says "waiting for snow" i dont really like how on the other ones it says dirt,air,water,snow under haekmendas get rid of that and change the colors a bit and theyd all be sick ( maybe make the water blue and the shirt some other colour, dirt brown e.t.c

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

hahaha ... man, thats the whole point o the shirts. Without the haekmandas logo on the chest, I could have made anything. Thats the focus point of the design, I cant get rid of that. 

Or would you say ... dude, this armada shirt rocks, but not with the armada logo on the side. get rid of that?

 

[kfilenda]

i like the shirts, one minor complaint, i work in a screen printing shop and make shirts, dealing with seams and really big logos are a little tricky and might cost some money and effort, but defenitly worth it.

 

[Grube]

yeah there ok but your logos pretty tight

 

[inactive]

try a dark blue for the shirt color

 

[miroz]

The first one is dope. Personally, I don't bike or anything, and I think thats why it says "dirt" but I think those descriptions would flow better if you said something more like "wind" or something...just a suggestion. Those are dope though, I'd probs pick one up.

 

[Bab.]

theyre dope man, but yeah definetly add some colors. i like the graphics theyre creative

 

[poiuytrewq]

^seine_Dudeheit: I think he meant get rid of the stuff under the haekmandas.

The top shirt looks sweet, I would definitely print a trial one first

though, to see how the transition to the all white bottom of the shirt

would look, depending on the print style or fabric, it might end up

weird.

 

[WV_Skier]

I would get the first one its sweet. Deff let everyone know if you print some up.

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

Here the updated versions. With corrections of the points, that you did not like, and also in another format, because of printing problems. The blue is a little bit fucked up ... it would be a little bit less cyan

I think, I will def. realize the first one, but not shure about the others.

 

[poiuytrewq]

If possible, make it so that it does not look like you had to print within a rectangular area, maybe by separating the snow flakes at the top.

 

[doublexl]

those are tight. you should make a city one for us city dwellers.

like.....idk. something cool.

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

Ok, PM me with your ideas and I will see, what I can do! for you!

 

[WikiWiki]

i would most definetly buy your shirts made of fabric

 

[panojibber]

I would suggest that you could possible change dirt to earth to make it sound more elegant?

I mean, think about it,

"snow air earth water"

vs

"snow air dirt water"

Its up to you, but I like the earth one better. That would be at risk of sounding like Element too though...

Anyways, I would wear one even if it wasn't change, they're still all really sick.

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

Is definately an argument! ... Its not really a difference, if I change it. Would be still sick though 

 

[seine_Dudeheit]

BUMP ... more opinions please

 

[Korbit]

I like the shirts
it would be sick if u cud make a logo, something simple that doesn't involve words ya know
and us contrasting colors, since your doing the whole snow dirt water use more nartural colors such as and burnt orange and burgandy.....
oh and there are lot of kool designs and stuff u cud do with tree branches and such
hope my ideas help spark sum of ur own