Honest Critiquing

[SIMPLE.]

Hey M&A guys,

I was looking for some helpful critiques and advice on one of our latest edits,

Although we talk within the crew about ways to make our edits better, there's never really unbiased opinions and I was hoping you guy's could offer up some ways to take our filming/editing to the next level. I already know there are a couple shots with head cut, which I'm always trying to work on as it's my biggest pet peeve. However any other critiquing would be much appreciated.

Check our edit out here:
http://vimeo.com/101257456

 

[StokeFactor]

B-roll shots were sick, overall vibe was also good. I'd say the main thing is don't be afraid to play with your angles and try stuff when you film.

Try to make the shots more dynamic by doing some really close follow cam or by taking some low angle shots. As for the multi view tricks I like to put some really close up shots in there, but that's just how I do it.

Overall good edit tho, your work is sick

 

[SIMPLE.]

B-roll shots were sick, overall vibe was also good. I'd say the main thing is don't be afraid to play with your angles and try stuff when you film.

Try to make the shots more dynamic by doing some really close follow cam or by taking some low angle shots. As for the multi view tricks I like to put some really close up shots in there, but that's just how I do it.

Overall good edit tho, your work is sick

Thanks so much man,

Definetely like the close up angies too and will look to get more shots like that and just experiment more in general.