first ten seconds i enjoyed the mos. not too bad, but not something id have on my ipod. Keep trying! was not a fan of those saw sounding parts around 1:10, drop those.
You're going to be torn apart for being twelve, but overall not bad. It didn't really sound like dubstep, try working towards a techno/electronic type of thing instead. But not something I would have on my iPod.
hate to put my own shit in your thread but this was my first dubstep track...skip the first like 25 seconds cos intro sucks.
it ddint feel like dubstep if im honest kid, really listen to alot of dubstep and listen for each individual aspect of it to get a better idea of what needs to be put in.