Help make a tough decision.

you have a couple typos on your second shirt,

"The simplicity of the text makes everyone understand what your wearing and who you are reaping!"

*you're

*repping
 
yeah like everyone else said, you should definitely change it because butterstick makes no sense and its dumb. freshcut collective is way better.
 
if you're not actually a legitimately incorporated company, you really can't/shouldn't put Inc. after it.
 
you literally read none of this thread, did you?

There is overwhelming support for keeping the name butterstick.

But good god, change the logo and the description on your website. That paragraph sounds as if it was written by a foreigner with a vague understanding of english, but an excellent thesaurus.
 
Butterstick sounds good, but please for the love of god change your manifesto. It looks like you were just throwing darts at a dictionary in a miserable attempt to make a wordy, profound mission statement.
 
IMO if your starting a company

its not a good idea to pn ppl calling them a fucking faggot

good business plan kid
 
starting a clothing company? You should be focusing on the product itself instead of the name. your name doesnt have to be "catchy" to sell. Provide your customers with a quality product and good customer service and they will come back for more
 
Ok, so you now have the base of your company: the name. (Stick with Butterstick, as nearly everyone stated above.) The next step is to fine-tune everything else. First, the "mission statement", as Sneaky turtle said above, looks like you wrote something , and then used a thesaurus to change every other word and make it sound smart. In reality, it took away from the small business feel and made your company sound unprofessional. Instead, it should say something more personal, something more memorable. Maybe something about the start of your company, what you do, or who the founders are. it should be simple and something that sticks with people.

Once again, as many others stated, get rid of the B crown.

Now, for the designs. First off, I notice that you have only three designs. This is good, as it starts off simple, and comes off as being easy to handle. However, personally, the idea of having a so-called "Little Wayne" on a t-shirt that comes from a small company is sub-par, and once again, unprofessional. You have a small company and shouldn't create designs with pop stars or recogizable icons on them, leave that to the more general companies. Your designs should have more of a connection to your brand, and above all, should be ORIGINAL. There are many different options with the name you have, and many more designs you could come up with. You should make them yourself, and make them be something that, in the future, people will associate with the Butterstick brand. Come up with an original logo, and put that on a shirt.

Overall, start off simple, with original designs, and a product people will buy and associate with the Butterstick brand. Once it is well established, then expand, come up with more products, and good luck to you.

/rant, just some things that I believe could improve your business model.
 
And i just checked out your website...loose the crown. thats jiberish. not butterstick. And lil wayne? noooo abandon these ideas completely. Pm me with questions
 
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