Jon, ur getting better. Id work more tho on matching the rhyme beats to the music beats. Also if that was you you look like justin bieber at 12. Are you benjamin button?
My advice to you is to keep doing what you're doing brotha! This site is full of fucktards, use it for amping up your view tally and leave the parents-basement-bickering to these little bastards.
And I'll be honest, I was skeptical of your thing at first, but then I heard through a couple mutual friends of ours that you're the man who just loves life to the fullest. Keep at it McFee!