Graffiti Artists

shit, here it is

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Hey guys go to you tube and check out my profile "MrFloor4" thats where im posting all my videos from my free wall. I know im a toy and ill be the first to say it so leave all the bs out of the comments, unless you really feel the need to cause i dont give a fuck lol but its a tight spot i love it up there.
 
finally my contribution to the thread.

I havent painted in a really long time. this is just done in my backyard on a huge sheet of paper.

the black and green paint is montana gold, the rest is just rusto

dont hate, but id love feeback. i may have to post some stuff from my blackbook sometime in the near future.

the sketch:

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the work:

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the tag:

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...and an artsy one.

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all of these and more can be found on my flickr; link in the sig vVv
 
it was better than that rusto that i was using for the other colors!

why do u say that tho? granted it is overpriced, but the quality is pretty good; thick paint that doesnt run easily, multiple mixing balls, and cans are nice and full of paint.
 
Did my first tag last week..... It turned into a huge deal! People when nuts about it and all the cops tried to figure out who
 
for this one, yes. i cant think of a good name (i can admit that). im not to worried since i dont put stuff up regularly.

id like constructive criticism on my work.
 
Please use cheaper cans until you are more refined in your art. Unless, you are rich, than go right ahead. It's sort of a waste no offense.
Criticism
- Too many angles (curve it out)- Narrow letters. - ditch the weird outline- work on an even fill- ditch the bubbles completely (or fill them better)- Work on can control and line thickness- Get a better name- ditch the quotaions and halo in your handstyle (it's beyond played)- not really feeling the colors (opinion)
Hope this helped, and didn't come off as too harsh.
 
By narrow letters, I meant they were too narrow right now. It sort of looks like a large handstyle that takes up a wall excpet slightly thicker. I find that the best graffiti has most letters touching each other side by side.
 
okay thanks, thats exactly what i was looking for, it was helpful and not too harsh.

someone bought the cans for me, and those are the only two i have of montana gold, rest is all krylon and rusto.

i think im going to put up some from my blackbook because even i dont think that one looks good/is the best representation of what i can do.

stay tuned for more pics and keep the critique and help coming
 
I don't like your letters. Mostly the E. For the R and just in general when you go past the vertical line part make sure that they equal out to look like the other lines actually extend past it instead of looking like unnecessary ad-ons like you did. Don't know if that makes sense, but I am too lazy to draw you a picture.
 
also, hows the name "rogue"? that was originally just the word i wrote but its growing on me.

other possibilities: blaze, fuse, shade, fizzix

idk, lemme know on those or suggest others (inb4 toy jokes)
 
i saw that, but i dont live in an area that gets extremely hot or anything like that. plus id pretty much want it to paint, then take a good picture since i know it probably wont last for long.

what would u suggest instead?
 
This man knows what's up.
Also, if you guys can't get a hold of some NY Fats, just hit up you local craft store, find the elmer's spray glue and take the caps off that shit. It's the same thing.
 
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And i did another big one in a tight ass spot by Harriet Island at like 2 in the morning. Just going ham with tags too.
 
Fuuuuuuuckkkk..... here are the links if some wants to inbed that would be greatly appreciated. And BTW that Ace.K kid should stop posting his illegals on here where your face is visible on your profile, just a little heads up for ya.
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Dont go ham on tags itll just look messy and it brings on a toy factor, just hit bombs like there tags
 
Its so much easier with tags though. Hahaha. Thanks though, the cans i have dont have a removable cap (stupid Krylon ones) so it varies on wide and skinny spray. Any remedies to this?
 
Exactly tags are easier, if you only bomb youll get more respect and satisfaction. And the remedie would be rusto! Thats what i go with if i get it from a store. They have some with non removable caps but there semifat
 
you cant rack those, unless your hardware store is amazing or you took them from a graff shop, in which if you did you shouldnt write cause thats fucked up
 
At least I have style you toy ass bitch, the wall was for fun I would never do that shit on a real spot, I bet you have never even touched a can of paint let alone done something on a wall plus your stuff is garbage.

Stick to the sketchbook kid, you would get dissed to SHIT if ever tried hitting anywhere in the dot.

 
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