Uhm just an fyi, don't do that again.
1) Asher Roth is a talentless bitch whose songs cater almost specifically to pastel shirt wearing frat boys.
2) Don't take other peoples footage, if you edit anything its because YOU shot it, or someone asked you to. Don't steal other peoples footage.
3) Even if its mildly good ( not sure? only made it 30 seconds in) its probably because of how amazingly everything was shot.
Sorry if that was dick, but its the truth..
Tell you friend to shoot some summer shit, then post that up if you want a real critique.