Freedom Under The Eternal Flame

[Mike-O]

I've got some ideas for the third installation, I think you'll have some more contenders in there..

 

[Mike-O]

Final bump on this on a slow Sunday afternoon.

 

[Jane6]

 

[Mike-O]

Aww yeah. One can't simply pizza and french fry to Moardor.

 

[Simmo]

Good bump

I hadn't seen it before and that was awesome!

 

[Mike-O]

Thank you, sir.

 

[PlaygroundRapist]

I've read it now since i'm less drunk then ussual.

I like the pace and style. End battle could have been longer and more detailed.

Great read.. 9,5 out of a ten! (Actually a ten but in this Japanese way of not giving a ten because achieving perfection is impossible you can only strive towards it and you my friend came very ver far.)

 

[*DELETED*]

hahaha how did i miss this? brilliant.

 

[Mike-O]

Arigato, my friend. I also believe in Japo perfection, although I'm not gonna Seppuku myself just because of a 9.5 instead 10! I will strive for perfection with the next story... with the ideas I have it might not even be the last one.

And I agree with the final battle, but I wanted to end it real boss/manga king style quickly and decisively to show that B-Dog ain't nuthing ta fuck wit.

 

[Mike-O]

Very glad you liked it, spread the word.

 

[JON_MCMURRAY]

Haha glad I sang merrily

 

[feihlination]

trilogy bump

 

[kstanz]

Threadsz

 

[Spinoza]

Epos. Bumpos.

 

[Mike-O]

Thankos. Maximos.

 

[Mike-O]

U

 

[Mike-O]

The last