Freedom Under The Eternal Flame

[AOTEAROA]

didnt get past the first paragraph, sorry i dont like reading and if the first paragraph doesnt catch me, the piece doesnt have a chance.

 

[_Brotorious_]

 

[Mike-O]

I understand completely, something I have to work on. Have you read the previous chapter? Maybe then it would have made more sense.

 

[Mike-O]

Thanks. Could you elaborate on what you didn't understand, was it the language or the kinda inside jokery?

 

[Big5hifty]

if you don't think that Mike-O is one of the best ns'ers, then fuck you. his writing always impresses.

 

[Mike-O]

"Just when I thought I was out... they pull me back in."

 

[Mike-O]

D-d-d-don't you dare, you burglar!

 

[PetriDish]

totally i guess

 

[Mike-O]

Thanks dude, really.

I wonder, what could be Casabon's Achille's heel...?

 

[LevelFour]

That was really good man how old are you just curios

 

[Mike-O]

Just turned 25 five days ago.

 

[forrest-cole]

you're missing out on a pretty awesome story then bud! why don't you pull your head out of your ass give it a chance.

 

[Mike-O]

Well I never would have guessed Dubya would dig my shit..

 

[Mike-O]

Means a lot coming from you, man.

 

[Mike-O]

Haha, too bad autoplay is a bannable offense these days.

 

[Corin]

Can't wait for the next part, this is better than the drunk thoughts of Hemingway that I'm reading right now.

You should totally write a book. Or a few. I'd buy them.

 

[Mike-O]

If I ever do, I'll give out some free copies for all you guys who like my shit.

 

[Mike-O]

Well, it's an Inter forum, so it's understandable that the amount of text could scare some people off.

But really glad you liked it.

 

[Mike-O]

More will come, I promise.

 

[PetriDish]

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[PlaygroundRapist]

Too much p[ain meds right now will read later on when my head isn't so fuzzy.

 

[Mike-O]

Haha, could be pretty trippy if you read it now, but heal up.

 

[LDV]

First story I've read of yours and I enjoyed it. Keep it up!

 

[Mike-O]

Thanks, mate!

 

[Mike-O]

Appreciate it, won't leave again.

 

[loganimlach]

next level shit right there.

 

[Mike-O]

The Almighty speaks.

 

[Slowbro]

was this about a war on the olympics? it was awesome whatever it was.

 

[PartyHon]

that was a day maker

great job Mike!

 

[technique.]

lol. one of many great lines.

good read Mike-O

 

[panojibber]

Too much time is just enough time for ART.

Haha seriously though that was fucking awesome, at least the parts I read. I couldn't even make it all the way through I was lolling so hard. But I WILL read the whole thing.

 

[Mike-O]

Well said. I hope you enjoy the rest as well, haha.

 

[Mike-O]

Yes, and a continuation. The first part can be found here if someone hasn't seen it yet.

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/forums/readthread/thread_id/614971/

 

[PetriDish]

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[Mike-O]

Arigato, made my night.

 

[abathinggrape]

You beat me to it...

 

[Mike-O]

It's kinda hard to say how I feel like posts like this. What do they accomplish? Why even post? You think you're 'cool' for not reading something.. I don't get it.

 

[abathinggrape]

They accomplish nothing, now that I look back at it I probably shouldnt have posted it because I believe that the writing is very good. I just simply dont like to read long writings while surfing the web haha

 

[Mike-O]

Well I guess it's understandable. That's one issue for sure, I for one enjoy reading more from a screen than a book nowadays.

 

[Mike-O]

Thanks. Hope Kiesel sees this.

 

[TheHamburglar]

I heard Leon Dunny is over 12 feet tall

 

[Mike-O]

Well, surely you do not believe every single rumor that comes by?

It's definitely more like 17 feet...

 

[TheHamburglar]

Inconceivable!!

He needs to be cleared by air traffic control every time he hits a jump because he enters international airspace

 

[Mike-O]

Without a doubt, a good idea for future Flame iterations...

 

[Mike-O]

Again, glad you liked it!

 

[Mike-O]

They do rack up mighty quick!

 

[Mike-O]

Your head clear yet?

 

[Mike-O]

There will be more general screaming...

 

[Orrin]

Awesome!

 

[Holte]

Incredible.

I can't decide if Hall the Anklebearer or Leon Dunny is funnier.