I actually liked the music, feel, and colors. The vignetting was fine, IMO.
I wanted to see the car go fast. You showed the car, you made it look pretty, but if you're gonna show it moving, make it go fast. I wanted it to WHIP the shit past that first crane shot. Try and include that next time.
Other than that, looked great. Loved the colors, music fit well, great shots. I might have cut it up a little quicker and more to the music, but it was fun to watch nonetheless.