First attempt at song tell me what you think

[ScubaSteveFather]

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[AWALLRUS.]

SOUNDS LIKE IT SHOULD BE PLAYING IN THE BACKGROUND OF A VIDEO GAME MENU

 

[ScubaSteveFather]

Is that a good or a bad thing?

 

[corona]

pretty decent. it changes thoughts too often

 

[Yeezus]

all you did was get some loops in garageband and put loops together ya idiot. thats not really even a song. leave now.

 

[ironic]

It needs more cohesive beats going on- the piano seems a bit random.

 

[garrettwiz]

No need to insult, I thought it was pretty good man!