Editing Critique?

[Childstar.]

Be cruel, Be picky, Pick apart my editing and grading.

TOPP October Drift Day | FTN from Upped Ante Media on Vimeo.

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If your mean enough +K will be awarded.

Some shots I took, and some a friend took, so I know the shots will vary a bit.

 

[Childstar.]

Really nothin?

 

[Cincher]

The biggest one is that your video isn't working.

 

[Childstar.]

It works for me on firefox.

 

[j.benziger]

I noticed at the end there was a lot of black space with no music until it ended, probably a very easy fix. Another thing that annoyed me was your b roll/ friends camera work, because that what stood out to me the most. It looked exposed differently, white balanced differently and looked very handheld at some times.I don't know if you got rid of his shots you would have a enough for a well rounded edit, so maybe next time.

 

[Cincher]

Hmm, it appears to be playing for me now.

My apologies, it was not working when I tried earlier.

As for the actual video, I thought it was pretty good. Good shots, good editing, just overall a good production.