So first of all I am not trying to hate just help..with that in mind it was painful to keep watching after the first minute, the music was incredibly epic/lame and had nothing to do with the actual skiing, all of the filler shots, i.e. you putting your helmet on, riding the lift, etc were unnecessary, we know what skiing is like and we have all ridden a chairlift before. Honestly, the amount of skiing and the light were appropriate for about a one minute edit, if that, don't worry, we've all been where you are now edit wise. I love spread eagles and they are just about the only trick I have really dialed but they are sooooo lame to watch from a head cam perspective, actually pretty much anything but travis rice is lame to watch from that angle. So please try doing some follow cam shots, it will make your edit that much better right away, also, one last pet peeve, please do not wear those tongues on your full tilts outside of your pants unless you are sponsored or being sarcastic, spread eagles and level 1 full tilts do not mix, that's like trying to be Shane Mconkey and Tommy Walnuts at the same time...So hopefully this essay helps you make better edits.