Edit Critique

[JCTheut]

Me and a few buddies made a new edit and are looking for suggestions on how to improve it. Feel free to rip it apart below.
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/811383/Michigan--Midseason

 

[JCTheut]

If anyone knows how to embed that would be great. Thanks.

 

[ascent_studios]

[VIDEO]https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/811383/Michigan--Midseason[/VIDEO]

I don't like how there is sound from skiing in some shots and then not in others. Try to get as much sound as possible out of camera.

Lip on blind 2 at 1:28

Also a lot of the shots were shaky. I'd recommend investing in a glide cam and learning how to use it! Besides that I really liked it.

 

[JCTheut]

[VIDEO]https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/811383/Michigan--Midseason[/VIDEO]

I don't like how there is sound from skiing in some shots and then not in others. Try to get as much sound as possible out of camera.

Lip on blind 2 at 1:28

Also a lot of the shots were shaky. I'd recommend investing in a glide cam and learning how to use it! Besides that I really liked it.

Thanks for the embed. I definitly agree on the sound, some of the follow cams had a weird noise so i just cut the sound completley. I may need to invest in a mic and am trying to get a glidecam or at least a tripod soon to stabilize shots. Thanks for taking the time to give me some tips!