Edit Critique

[E-fry]

Made this edit of some shots i have gathered this year. I didn't film all of it we all film but i edited it.Help me improve!!
https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/597613.0/leftovers?c=11&o=3&t=2

bear with me i don't know how to embed from ns

 

[N.A.R]

Here ya go.

 

[N.A.R]

My thoughts:Edit ended very suddenly

There were a couple of night/evening shots that were in between day ones, I would try to do those at the end or something. It just kind of felt sudden.

 

[E-fry]

thanks! I didn't think about the evening shots being in the middle. Thanks man!!