Edit Critique?

[jeb_b_vt]

Opening Weekend in Dashney Mile from No Matter Productions on Vimeo.

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I know that the video quality isn't great but what do you guys think of the overall flow/editing?

 

[jeb_b_vt]

bump. thanks for the advice! our park is really hard to film in cause there are so many trees blocking out the light.

 

[Merlin.]

Don't use a white font against snow.