Edit critique please?

[jeb_b_vt]

Alex Romero from No Matter Productions on Vimeo.

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[HWW]

not bad, wasn't too long either.

here are the things i noticed:

• effects were used a little bit too much for a short edit

• could have left out the sloppy landing(s)

• not all shots should be the same speed, leaves something to be desired

• the text at the end was very difficult to read because of all the clutter

good work, i give you a 7/10.

 

[jeb_b_vt]

Thanks for the tips! I thought it turned out pretty well for only taking 4 runs haha

 

[jeb_b_vt]

Bump

 

[jeb_b_vt]

he wanted me to make it somewhat like the b&e show, was it even close?