Edit critique? +K

alec.ogden

alec.ogden

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Tell me what you guys think! Please just use constructive criticism, no harsh comments! Thanks +K
 
Enjoyed it overall. I think the only things I would change would be the title text at the beginning shaking, the little vibration motion of the letters was very distracting to me. And also at the beginning you flashed the logo for the ski hill for quite a while, not that I'm saying its a bad thing to rep your hill but if it were me I wouldn't advertise for em if they weren't compensating me for it somehow. But as I said, the video itself was very enjoyable! Well broken up by some b-roll, the shots seemed well framed, and everything flowed together!
 
That was a sweet edit! I really liked the chill feel and as that guy said^^ composition and colours were very nice. I would say that intro is too long and people would lose interest. Maybe have some B-roll going on behind it to keep it fresh??
 
overall the edit was fun to watch and fair chilled, i'd cut the intro down abit and put some cut shots of you skiing/boarding in to tease the audience and when the vocals come in try your best to sync the jump with the vocal it just appears more profesional and what not. apart from that it was good, i like how you didn't go with many cliche shots (clicking into bindings,loading/unloading chairlift etc) and also good song choice for the vibe of the video, i think if you went for some wu tang or something else it would appear as if you were trying to hard to conform to appeal to the masses but i'd keep it relatively the same good edit
 
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