Edit Critique +K

[NickVentura]

New edit I made from yesterday. Let me know if theres anything i can change up or do differently

Fun Day at South from Nick Ventura on Vimeo.

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[Soja.]

i thought it was actually really good, it was super well done and stable and had good framing for most of it, try to keep your subject in the middle of the frame though some points it was a little low but other than that good edit

 

[NickVentura]

Thanks! +K

 

[HWW]

try to get some different angles and also include still frames, it's nice to follow with the cam but not all the time. music was a bit aggressive and slightly too fast paced for the speed of the shots imo.

all in all pretty nice edit though, stoked for more!

 

[NickVentura]

Thanks! What do you mean by still shots? More of me standing there with the glidecam next to the rail?

 

[C.A.V.]

i would say about this, and i dont know if it was me but the audio came in really loud i had to turn it down alot

 

[NickVentura]

thanks! ill try and change up the shots next time

 

[Plankton]

skiing was good! i liked it, just vary the shots more and maybe try to film in a little bit of a lighter setting, besides that I liked it

 

[nickfallon]

i agree, good edit just need to switch it up a bit with some different angles, but great work

 

[HWW]

just shots where the camera is not moving.