Did my first couple sequences today

[norgeanders]

i know there are some things i should touch up but let me know what you think

http://sphotos.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/523978_10150693498150583_713500582_9549808_376310410_n.jpg[img/]

Let me know what you think otherwise and some good ideas for next time i make one?

 

[norgeanders]

 

[Sklar]

I have the same shoes as that guy

as far as the photos, don't forget about your composition just because you're making a sequence. The action and angle don't really work for me

The processing doesn't look the best either, the trees are glowing. How did you make them?

 

[BolderPro]

What software are you using? It looks decent but it seems some shadows and some parts are cut off? Also agree composition is not very good but its a nice experiment

 

[Balto]

when shooting sequences you MUST be shooting in full manual, that way the exposure is the same for every shot. If you look at your pics, you can see where the images are put together, this should not be visible at all, make sure everything is lined up right and watch your colors in post

 

[norgeanders]

yea i noticed that my shutter speed wasn't high enough, on these shots and i am using Photoshop elements 9

here are some more

 

[norgeanders]

^^ these ones i had to use a higher iso because it was dark which i did like because it made everything kind of grainy

 

[currentwestman]

not bad for first attempts man. lighting looks consistent on each frame, so keep it that way (ie stay full manual). contrary to the first couple posts i liked the composition in the first pictures with the trees. as far as cropping each frame goes, just make sure you crop the subject tight and dont forget about shadows. in the last picture you posted, the foot was cut off in the first frame. so crop the second frame a little tighter to reveal the whole foot.

and the glowing trees in the first few pictures could be from raising the "sharpening" in raw? there could be other causes but i know sharpening has done that to me before.

 

[norgeanders]

Yea you could be right about the sharpening, but i did not even notice the knee and foot cut off thanks for that! I love all the critiquing thanks a lot I'm just starting to get into photography/videography and am login it!