Crits please!

[wdbo.]

i just recorded this song today, all music by me. how do you like it?

 

[wdbo.]

shit, i forgot the link...

http://http://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/1186357319MySong2.m4a

 

[wdbo.]

bumps

 

[foodisfun]

link no work for me

 

[foodisfun]

yea idk it still says page can not be displayed

 

[Joe_]

http://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/1186357319MySong2.m4a

cool song winn. did you write the melody first then match it up to the chords? its solid for your first song

 

[wdbo.]

i just matched it all up , i wrote it in a half an hour or so and recorded and edited it in two hours

 

[wdbo.]

it's not my first song, its just the first i've recorded

 

[wdbo.]

i did this one today, it's pretty bad, i didnt feel like fixing all the fuckups

http://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/1186448796MySong3.m4a