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thanks yo!

Nobody else has got anything to say? want some feedback, wanna know how i can improve.
 
Really sick edit, although a few shots were a bit shaky, mostly in the intro. I would say you should try to tell more of a story in future edits, I got kinda bored after seeing trick after trick. The 50-50 disaster was nasty tho. And I loved the ferg.
 
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Really sick edit, although a few shots were a bit shaky, mostly in the intro. I would say you should try to tell more of a story in future edits, I got kinda bored after seeing trick after trick. The 50-50 disaster was nasty tho. And I loved the ferg.
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that's exactly what I'm trying to do in the edit I'm making right now, we just filmed the one day and I didn't really have enough time to get shots I was satisfied with to tell a story. Thanks homie
 
that was super sick! as someone else said a few shots could've been less shakey but im guessing this was mainly handheld so you did good for not having a stabilizer. the only other things you could do to make it better would be to give a larger variety of shots and maybe add some colour grading. try some close up shots focusing on the skis on the rail, far away shots of a jump, get creative. before you shoot a trick look at your surroundings or just think about how you can make it even more interesting/appealing. especially if they have other tricks on that feature. your editing seemed good, especially for your second time. although that nosebutter that was put in slow motion was a little choppy
 
That was great. My only criticisms would be that you should invest in some sort of stabilization, especially since you're trying to focus on filming this year, and maybe branch out in terms of music... I feel like so many edits these days come out with that same kind of rap, a little variety would make it less mundane. Definatley a great edit, loved the skiing and colors!
 
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