Critique This....

[RW_Visuals]

Looking for constructive feedback on this 30 second spot I made. Still have to go through and fix some over exposed spots, but what are peoples thoughts on it thus far.

https://vimeo.com/48338356

 

[jkauffman22]

The biggest thing I think is the audio. I can't tell if you'd rather have the song more or the raw audio more. Dial it in for what you want. Also is this just trying to portray a racing company? A little lost as to why the company or place does besides just "drive" cars... Just my two cents