Critique this golf edit?

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Yeah I was surprised I was so interested by a golfing edit. Great choice of song, excellent filming, excellent editing. My only slight critique, and it's VERY slight, is that I didn't really like the blur on the edges of the credits at the end. Other than that, fantastic job.
 
I'd onvert your audio to and Aif or wav and re export the vid. The audio is popping, final cut doesn't work well with mp3s.
 
What scene file did you shoot with? If you didn't set one up, try fooling around with them and customizing the image a bit- you will be able to achieve a much different picture from the camera.
The editing flowed nicely. I liked the use of DOF, especially the tracking on the putt. Maybe take out the couple black fades and cross fade or add another shot or two- the video seemed to end and then restart at the black. As Alex mentioned, the audio needs to be fixed as well, but these are small details.
Great work and a nice change in pace with a different sport! Keep it up!
 
If you guys want this song here is the name.

"Home" by Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros

Dope golfing edit though he's pretty good at golfing to.
 
I really liked it, good filming which kept me interested the whole time. Also were you using a glidecam?
 
Damn looks like Im in the minority, many of the shots were underexposed and I thought the use of Edward Sharpe was terrible. That songs vibe is the exact opposite of lets go golf.
 
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