Critique these two minor edits

bhill2.0

bhill2.0

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Two edits I made while on a 4 hour drive. If anyone wants to give me a few suggestions or tips I would gladly take it. Comments Questions Concerns. I don't know if im ready for a demo reel.
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it was kinda annoying to me how much of it was out of focus. recognized currency right away though, so props on that. didn't see the first one
 
I felt like I was at the Jersey Shore for the first video, sorry it just had that vibe. THe second was cool, seeing the different side of orlando
 
I was shooting on a Canon 5D Mark ii - 50mm prime Zeiss - 28mm Canon.
Im new to HDSLRS so its hard to manually focus. Im hoping for a rig soon but thanks nigger
 
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Surprised some shots were under exposed, also some shitty coloring, maybe learn to color correct? Can't believe you got to shoot those two shit edits with potentially (depending on the zeiss lens) a 6-7 grand setup, which most of the money being in the lens. Did you even shoot 24p?
 
You're claiming a zeiss 50mm lens, which one? because the ones i know of that fit on a 5d (without installing a cinema mount) is the 50mm CP which is a $5000 lens.

What's the point of shooting with a 5d if you're not going to use 24p?

And ive never filmed in a club, but i know a couple people who used to all the time and they knew how to make it not a bunch of blow out colors.
 
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