Critique please.

[Algebra]

ok so there is this "footy fest" ski edit thing and me and my friends wanted to make an edit. so i broke my leg and edited. its due on the 17th so i have a little bit more time. just any ideas really, and btw it has to be less than 5 minutes
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[Algebra]

o and air raid is a is some people submotting one too and i did that too fuck with them.

 

[steezy69]

HOLY SHIT!!!! SOOOO FUCKIN SICK BRO like really the best vid evar!!1! you made it like hella thug gangster at the beginnin and then like hella chill and shit at the end thats sooooo sick nasty. you should get a t2i and ur vidz will be HELLA BALLA!!!!11!!! fuck ya

 

[dispatchQ_main]

k

 

[Algebra]

lol okay, and there were a few shots from a t2i in there...

 

[steezy69]

yyea yea yea dawg those was the sickestt!!!! +++++KKK cuz dat was dopeshit