I would make it clicky but it appears your sig has already taken care of it!
Here's what I noticed. just gonna jot it out real quick.
- I like the basic design and layout. at first glance it's pretty pleasing/ fulfilling. Cut down the amount of text alot though. Also a lot of the text is just meaningless empty jabber- try to find a mix between simplicity, style, and practicality. this is stylistic (big fancy words) but doesn't flow or really tell you anything.
examples:
"our main focus is on seizing the superb minds of our followers, who are significantly appreciated." no flow/improper sentence structure. simplify it for sure.
"Our artists capture our athlete's presentation of leisure pursuits through the art of filming; the creation of capturing our athletes at superiority levelsof performance." lots of mistakes here. awkward semi-colon, spelling, grammar, etc. I'd just revise this entire paragraph, shorten it, and take out about half
- your store area is a little plain. fill it in more; it has an air of emptiness.
-the blog is quite nice actually. diversify your posts a bit (more than just edits).
- your team section- everything looks good, but for some reason every rider you have looks like they're 10 in their picture, but older in the videos. Get all your riders/ team members together and take photos that show them now and are all uniform.
- make a media section. having the edits under the pages isn't that appealing. also, make sure you only post the best of the best. I won't delve into it too much, but some of the riders look a little green in the edits; namely the g-suit/jiberish kid(s). 360's and straight boxes while wearing a g-suit get you only one kind of response from the skiing world. think about it.
and lastly
- maybe change your logo? it has a distinct resemblance to the j-crown logo. I also am not a fan of the text style that the B is in. try some new designs maybe.
hope all that helps.
