Critique My Video

[boomie]

Made this promo video for a sticker business I run. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks

[video]https://vimeo.com/201563687[/video]

 

[spruitm]

Pretty cool. I would just say to tighten things up a little, especially the parts on the computer, or maybe just speed those shots up a bit. Also try to throw on some warp stabilizer, it's not horrible, but there's some shake going on the whole time, which really cheapens the video. I think getting it down to about 1:00 would be good. Oh, and maybe some kind of drop shadow or stroke on the logo at the start to get it to pop a little

 

[boomie]

Pretty cool. I would just say to tighten things up a little, especially the parts on the computer, or maybe just speed those shots up a bit. Also try to throw on some warp stabilizer, it's not horrible, but there's some shake going on the whole time, which really cheapens the video. I think getting it down to about 1:00 would be good. Oh, and maybe some kind of drop shadow or stroke on the logo at the start to get it to pop a little

Thanks for the suggestions man!