Critique my video please

[werd.]

READ THIS BEFORE YOU WATCH: I made this video this year before I even knew what NS was, and hadn't spent that much time in the park at all. Personally I think I could've done much better with it, but it's just leftover footage from the trip and I think it turned out alright so whatever. Basically if you're looking for a park edit this isn't the video for you.

 

[hippy.]

Too much POV...also if you would of keep up the editing throughout the video it would be a 9/10 but honestly 8/10

 

[LeThomasH]

Hi Guys !

I'd like to show you the edit I made this winter using a GoPro HD Hero and many mounts :

If you're king enough to give me some notes about it, this would be great ! Thanks