Critique My Topsheet

[Wild-Willis]

Here is the topsheet i designed for the Icelantic 6th Sense comp. I just need some critiquing or ideas of stuff you like or what i should do better, thanks.

 

[jibbinc.]

cut it into ski shape

 

[jibbinc.]

The middle is sick, but that top cloud looks out of place. Overall dope ski!

 

[Native]

yeah, definitely dope. but i'd change the moon/cloud. it can't really tell what it is, maybe offset it a little bit. besides that it's dope

 

[ski-swagga]

diggin the yeti

 

[Wild-Willis]

yeah thanks, its a moon in the shape of the Icelantic 1 degree celsius logo. but yeah i think im gunna change it