Critique my new edit

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NickVentura

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I just finished a new edit and would love to hear some criticism. First of all this was my first time using a shotgun mic and at one point my mic died towards the end of the day. It was shot over a couple days so it was hard to get the light even and I am still working on getting smooth shots with the glidecam. Thanks!

Here it is:

Tranquility from Nick Ventura on Vimeo.

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The uneven audio was annoying to me, I know you said your mic died so its whatever but next time, try to keep that consistent audio. It seemed like your audio was overall too loud, do you check your audio levels? I always end up turning down my song 5-10 db, it makes the skiing audio pop alot better without turning it up a ton.

It seemed like you were trying to be moxley, real hard. Very similar angles, the same style titles. Just a piece of advice, do you own shit, copying other people isn't gonna just make your shit better. Im not trying to be harsh, just saying it pays off the be original.
 
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