Critique my music pt. 2

[SirFryanator]

www.myspace.com/nextgenerationpoets

the only songs I would consider decennt are "melancholy" and "sick"

but tell me what you think of "stream of thought beginning"

I have about 2 more minutes of lyrics but I'm waiting until I pick up my new mic to record/re-record

btw, everything in "stream of thought" did happen.

 

[Sideways_Shane]

shits sick matt. i like the new one the most.

 

[SirFryanator]

gracias

anyone else?

 

[2+2=5]

thats a shitty recording job. what did u use? like a dollar store microphone and voice recorder on windows?

 

[SirFryanator]

yeah, a shitty mic and ACID pro 6.0. I have a retardedly bad microphone, but I'm using a good one tomorrow. Hopefully re-recording a couple songs. I need to get my LP done by July so I'll need to fix them up anyways

I'm more focused on what did you think of the content, flow, voice, beats (I spent a fuckload of time on some of them, others a friend made who's pro at making these things), etc.

 

[donots06]

i liked the beats, i think the vocals could use some work though.

check out me and my cousins song "Everyday Worries". The whole things a joke, I think it turned out pretty well though.

www.myspace.com/ryancobbproject