Critique my Music for +Karma

[Tbrody]

Here's a project I just finished for an art class / personal music musings

Let me know what you think, all comments are appreciated

And this is all me, no loops

http://taylorbrody.tumblr.com/post/89094870/we-have-a-vision-taylor-brody

 

[cocktapus]

thats pretty good man for not using loops. how long have you been making music?

 

[Tbrody]

dabbled in synth stuff off and on for 3 or so years

 

[hartig]

woah, 100 views and 2 replies?

good stuff by the way

 

[Tbrody]

i know people don't want the karma haha

thanks

 

[[Adam]]

the music blended well with the speech. well done sir

 

[HWW]

It was pretty good. Easy to listen to.

 

[mait]

Diggin the music, and the lyrics are a good backdrop

 

[thomas_dube]

gahd that was trippy !

 

[gnarnia.]

the flow of that worked really well

 

[TPatel]

i liked it. it was really good, esp for not using any loops, and the "vocals" were blended really well.nice job.

 

[ho_chi_minh]

sounded pretty good expect for your bass drum(kick) beats. i felt like they through off the natural rhythm. like they didnt hit in the right spots.

 

[sick-as-aids]

im playing it as i write, so i write exactly what comes to mind as it happens..

i like the start, works well, keeps me interested in the song, may drag on for a word or 2 to long, like the change of beat, then the increase of tempo, main beat needs to change, o it did, thats good, like the drop, with the voice coming back into play.,.. o its a shame it had to end...

overall i liked

 

[JoeTheRipper]

Sick sample, where's it from? I don't know if you mean to kind of do it on the off beat, but if you did I think it's quite interesting. I was quite disappointed with the drop, nothing really happened. Use a different kick maybe? it's pretty good.

 

[stevel]

dope

 

[Crock360]

I liked it a lot, but felt like you were just starting to take me somewhere, then it stops.
Off beat snare, or whatever it's supposed to be about 3/4 through kindof threw me off at first.

 

[BigJew]

It's really good for not using loops. The drum beat doesn't really work though. It doesn't go with the rest of the music.

 

[Yeezus]

i like how the guy is givin the speech but with the calm music. pretty cool

 

[SirFryanator]

It's decent. I too want to know how long you've been doing music, those beats were pretty good

 

[fragglemuffin]

i liked it alot man, nice job

 

[mattytru]

yeah i really liked that, but the drums were like in 3/4 or somrthing

 

[hank_hill]

liked it alot, was chill

 

[WSMFP]

dude that was some good stuff, and very trippy. i likeeeeee. i might put a little hip hop beat added to the end but it was dope.