Poor color choice, they clash and not in a good way. Your V is skinnier than the N which is odd. Not so sure about the D & A in media, were you trying to make a face? You also shouldnt mix a script face with a sans serif that has similar visual language. Too complex, not sure why you have a light drop shadow on the left side of everything. Didnt even notice it until I clicked on the picture.You should also consider cleaning up the outlines, they are jagged, not smooth. Also I dont know about the lockup that you have right now works best.