Critique my lil teaser please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Franck_clever]

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[Franck_clever]

[*][url=http://vimeo.com/20818347

 

[Franck_clever]

http://vimeo.com/20818347

dude i suckkkkkk

 

[Trojan~Man]

^ yes you do.lol

the only thing that id have to say would be to let the shots go on for a little longer. i understand the affect you were going for and it was good but maybe let them go for a bit longer ... that flat off the a frame at the start looked sick

 

[Franck_clever]

^thanks a lot man!

 

[Franck_clever]

something else?

 

[Franck_clever]

..

 

[Brentizzle]

is it a teaser for an edit or for a ski movie your making or what?

 

[grilledsteezeyo]

i liked the idea of cutting it to only see a portion of the trick for the teaser, but some of the cuts seemed a bit random. it might just be me, but try to time it more with the music your using next time.

 

[Franck_clever]

thanks for all your comments! apreciate that! im making a little movie at the end of the season with my friends for fun

 

[Franck_clever]

All edited with my laptop trackpadd! forgot my mouse and that suck