Critique my Latest Works!

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Hey M&A,

Its been a while and I have not been frequenting the forums recently, but here are a couple videos I have made in the past few months. Any critique is appreciated. Enjoy!

To All Gates from Stephan Chaikovsky on Vimeo.

Haiku from Stephan Chaikovsky on Vimeo.
 
1st one was boring, and why did he change from being super excited when he did the u turn, but after that just went back into bored mode. shake was a problem

2nd one was a sweet idea, I really liked it, would have been a lot better if you had framed it better, and it wasn't so shaky.
 
alright word up, thanks for the advice. The shakiness on the first one was intentional for the look i was going for and the 2nd one unfortunately i didnt have a glidecam for so the one follow was shaky. Its very hard framing it when you do the panels, I did what I could though
 
i actually thought the first one was pretty ok. at first i was confused at what was going on, probably because it showed him walking around and looking depressed for so long, but there seemed to be a lack of emotion and change once he had made a decision to leave.
 
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