Critique my facemask/necktube design?

[patagonialuke]

Hey all,

I'm doing the design for the CSU Outdoor Club neck tubes through Phunkshun and I was hoping to get some feedback on my design so far. I would love any input people have, specific items I've been looking at are the scale of the logo, filling in the spaces between the letters in "Outdoor Club", and any other feedback y'all have.

Cheers,

Luke

 

[Andrew_M]

This is super sick! I'd say maybe center the background graphic so that either the white or the darker section is in the middle of the logo, but that's just what I would do instead of centering it the way you did. The only real problem I saw was that the left side of the mountains in the logo falls past the yellow section into the white outer rim but on the right side they don't, so maybe choose one way or another and apply it to both sides so that it looks balanced. Other than that its pretty perfect, nice work

 

[LukasSchroeder]

looks super sick, definitely do what andrew said. in ym opinion the white part of the mountains should be in the middle of the logo, but try both and seen what loooks better. i also think that the mountains in the logo should be kept inside that circle. like how it is on the right side. great job!