Critique my edit

[Joel.]

Just made my first edit. Didn't get that many vies but thats all good. If you guys can critique it and let me know any thought on it i would appreciate it. Hopefully more to come
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/863468/Joel-Sabo----Rab

 

[iFlip]

It looks like you forgot your poles.

 

[1776]

that was pretty fuckin sick

 

[iced]

Dad with the kid in the intro was ten outta fuckin ten

 

[jjdsteeze]

Usually when I see a "Critique my edit" post the edit is god awful. yours wasn't bad. there was some shots that probably could have been left out, but overall sick edit!

 

[SKRockies]

actually pretty sick try some slow rotations off jumps next time too for style i guess, maybe a switch 3 or a big 1 to switch 3. i dunno

 

[AlfredHitchCAULK]

skiing was on point from an actual editing stand point it was way better than I was expecting, great use of slo-mo and good camera shots overall. If anything I would try stabilizing some shots a few were little wobbly and maybe experiment with color a little bit in the future cuz that can add another interesting element.

 

[Da.Vinci]

need more grabs

 

[brett_fisher]

i really enjoyed that. it was sick

 

[Joel.]

Thanks guys! actually really appreciate it

 

[Joel.]

need more grabs

haha ya for real. I'll work on it

 

[FroesenSkeeze]

That was really good in my opinion. I never knew Rabbit Hill had such a good park. Coming from Saskatoon, we really don't have much around here, so we really appreciate a well-made park.