Critique my edit

[Jesse_]

Hey guys, so this is one of my first attempts at making a proper ski edit of sorts. Any suggestions or honest criticism is welcome. Thanks!
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/863350/C-H-O-C-C-Y-M-I-L-K

 

[cultrara]

Throw some levels/curves on there and get some contrast.

Chocolate motif could be slimmed down, kinda detracted from the edit.

 

[Jesse_]

Throw some levels/curves on there and get some contrast.

Chocolate motif could be slimmed down, kinda detracted from the edit.

Fair point haha, ill keep that in mind for the next edit i make. Thanks.