Critique My Edit

Im not good on the edit part of things but the only thing I noticed with the film was smooth out the follow cams (easier said than done) & keep working with that tripod. I think. The very first shot of the brothers was kind of dragging. I dont know if you have a fluid head tripod, but I would invest in one. Not trying to be a dick just trying to help, I also need to take my own advice haha
 
13711999:.JakeThaDug. said:
Im not good on the edit part of things but the only thing I noticed with the film was smooth out the follow cams (easier said than done) & keep working with that tripod. I think. The very first shot of the brothers was kind of dragging. I dont know if you have a fluid head tripod, but I would invest in one. Not trying to be a dick just trying to help, I also need to take my own advice haha
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alright thanks I have a really crappy tripod that I'm upgrading soon haha

also my glide cam skills are shit I need a lot of work on that
 
All these shots are insane but I think you should change the song in the first part of the edit. good song but I would choose something that is kinda like the second song. doesn't quite fit the edit. Good stuff though
 
Overall good edit. Songs were a little too slow. Typically, slower songs are better with slow motion and faster songs are better with normal speed footage.
 
Edit was pretty good seemed way to long for most kids' attention spans though. As with most of us amateurs, glidecam work could be smoother. Shots are all technically solid, I just felt it lacked some creative shots or transitions to mix up the typical glidecam follow cam style especially at this length.
 
13712005:reecemasters0 said:
All these shots are insane but I think you should change the song in the first part of the edit. good song but I would choose something that is kinda like the second song. doesn't quite fit the edit. Good stuff though
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13712017:bensmullen said:
Overall good edit. Songs were a little too slow. Typically, slower songs are better with slow motion and faster songs are better with normal speed footage.
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13712109:finnolydorb said:
Edit was pretty good seemed way to long for most kids' attention spans though. As with most of us amateurs, glidecam work could be smoother. Shots are all technically solid, I just felt it lacked some creative shots or transitions to mix up the typical glidecam follow cam style especially at this length.
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thanks guys

I should have made it a lot shorter haha
 
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