Critique my edit ;)

[The_Hannes]

Hey NS,

I made this video of me and my friends to promote a school event. I know that the skiing is only mediocre, but it would be great if you could give me some tips in general or on editing.

Thanks, Hannes

 

[Mkvackay]

my ears are bleeding

 

[KillaSteeze]

not a fan of the music either but otherwise pretty decent, and im craving pow too

 

[The_Hannes]

any other opinions out there?

 

[swankyfishphant]

like the lapse of the train but i could careless for the music but overall good edit