Critique My Edit

dunesquirrel

dunesquirrel

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Made a tramp edit with my t3i and kit lens. I shot it in a flat/neutral colour type and then did my best to correct and grade after. The cloudy/ hazy skies made it look kinda bad imo. What can I do to fix this. Why are my cuts off when I export to vimeo. In final cut they're perfectly on beat? What else can I do? Thanks

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im not by any means a camera expert so don't know about all of the colour stuff, i ddint really like the titles though, they looked really amateur if you get me, something cleaner without the outline bit would have looked better imo...
 
not bad but the lettering in the beginning i didnt like, i felt like the shot at the clouds was cool and then those damn letters popped up lol but overall looks good, the color correcting is pretty noticeable. Not bad
 
There is some potential with this video but you need to work on the colors and color grading and such because at the beginning the colors were bright but as the edit went on the colors were darker. Also edit more to the beat of the music to make it flow better. Otherwise it wasn't that terrible.
 
That happened for me too I forgot to mention that. It was something that really bothered me thanks for pointing it out.
 
thanks ill be posting a revamped i guess edit tomorrow night. i think it looks a lot better. There is just that one shot in the middle from the side that just looks totally off because it just suddenly decided to get really cloudy and dark. Pissen me off! Any suggestions on how to fix it?
 
Here's a polished version. I still feel my colours are off yet my i cant pinpoint it. It may have had to deal with the lighting as behind us was a forrest. how were my cuts. I tried to stay away from slowmotion. what do you think overall?

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The colors were getting better but all the shots lagged for me and I tried this on my multiple computers all with different internet connections just to make sure. So I would check that out if I were you.
 
like the shots were glitch or you just cut them badly as in the shot would start in one place and abruptly cut to him half way across the tramp in te middle of a trick.
 
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