DavidRoss
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Critique My Edit.
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.Max.
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-00:19 you left a frame of empty space causing a black flash that was really distracting.
-Don't start a shot before the camera movement begins. Especially if you're not smooth with your movements. It jerks in and really takes me out of the edit, it causes the viewer to realize they're watching an edit and makes other flaws more noticeable. Your goal as an editor and filmmaker is to immerse the viewer in a world and hide every motion/cut. Once people realize they're looking through a lens that experience gone and all they can do is find your flaws.
-The first shot was a cool idea, however I didn't think it added anything to the edit as a whole.
-A longer fade out for the audio at the end would be nice.
.Max.
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ChucklesNorman.
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Don't re-use songs! especially one used in the most viewed long boarding video of all time. I liked the vibe though.
. haha thanks bro.
