Critique my edit.

[DG.3]

please give feedback on everything. +k thanks!
tease edit from Dylan Gillespie on Vimeo.

 

[thatsG]

1. Different song (already used in a top rated edit)

2. Kinda sloppy tricks

3. Add some transitions

All in all I like it. Keep it up

 

[Craze]

The edit was good, and you have some good tricks I would just focus on your style now.

 

[K_FRANK]

work on style then..........profit?

 

[A.Eberhard]

Change up your render settings the quality looked bad. The song didn't match the riding style,no offence personally I just didn't like it at all 6/10.

 

[Eli.D]

change the song

 

[DG.3]

quality of camera was low (original gopro) what kind of music do you think i shouldve used?

 

[.Max.]

Are you talking about him making a profit by selling these edits?...

I'm sorry to burst your bubble but that just won't happen until you have a much better understanding of filming, angles, lighting, editing and the skiers get much better. I would say most of all, work on landings, wipe off the camera when snow gets all over the lens and be more steady with your filming.

other than that nice job.

 

[Alex=God]

its a joke ....................... from 4chan

 

[JibUrNut]

I'm pretty sure that joke originally came from soutpark, the episode about when these little elf knome things where stealing underpants

 

[tom.skier]

This. I liked it overall though.