Critique my edit please

[bkap]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zKgHwEEEn0M
obviously its not amazing but i just do this for fun and just want some tips,more on editing than anything else.

 

[SeanTom]

For The Lazy

 

[s_a_m]

pretty sick skiing! you should get a tri-pod though...

 

[pello]

+1a tripod is a good idea

 

[Ebaneezer]

you guys are try to afterbang way too hard, and the kid in the striped jacket needs some bigger pants

 

[..jack]

You would get some cool shots using a tripod. It would make it a lot better if there was some variety and a mix between still and moving shots.
Overall, it wasn't a bad edit at all. I'm not to sure on the titles or the font you've used at the beggining. I think simple always looks better, maybe just have some plain white or black text for each riders first shot.
Maybe try and get some filler/ non skiing stuff in there too, might make the edit seem more fun and give it a bit of an atmoshpere.
Just whenever you next get out to film try and get interesting angles on things.
Sick edit and there's some really cool stuff in there.

 

[A.Eberhard]

I didn't care for the song wasn't really my taste ,but whatever. As said above more interesting shots, get creative stand further back. Make you follow cams more steady some of them were good some not so good, your filming will make your edit much better. Oh ya and on a skiing note lay off on the afterbang a bit. I'll give you 7/10 for the edit.

 

[bkap]

alright yeah i get what your saying. thanks bro ill get on that +k