It's always hard to critique an edit like this.
I know you're not really a dedicated "filmer," but if you're aspiring to be then you really should start off with getting a tripod.
I liked how to experimented with different filming techniques and angles like sliding out from behind objects, panning up and then back down. Things like that always make a nice clean natural transition.
Maybe getting a better camera would help you get a sort of "creative spark," I know it did for me.
I don't really know what else to say so I'll leave it to somebody who knows more.